Continuing
my “blog hopping" with Goodread's Baby Boomer Lit group, here is the 5th excerpt from Boomerang, the first
novella in the GIRLFRIENDS trilogy. After Mary Jo began receiving funds monthly
from an anonymous benefactor, she invests in her best friend's wedding- planning
business, “The Better Way.” She and Melanie find a
wonderful property in the Temecula wine
country and expand Melanie's already-successful business.
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After
escrow closed, they spent $1,000,000 renovating the mansion. It was mostly cosmetic indoors, but they left
no stone unturned for the grounds. 30
acres were planted in grapes and the house set on 20 acres. While about five acres were nicely
landscaped, “The Better Way” wanted it to be more than nice; they wanted it to
be spectacular! There were beautiful,
mature trees throughout the grounds with manicured shrubberies in maze-like
formations. They developed the rest of
the 20 acres into different divisions.
One section had monolithic shrubs, which gardeners pruned into figures
of every geometric shape. One section
was devoted to a simulated rainforest while another was a beach where a large
pond was re-purposed into a tropical paradise with white sand and palm trees.
Other
parts of the grounds were devoted to unusual weddings as well: There were gothic settings, gazebos and
scenic areas among the vineyards for the ceremonies. In addition there were
fountains and cascading waterfalls in various locations. Garden paths were laid out among a profusion
of flowers of every genus and a prolific assortment of fruit trees. Swings were hung in oak trees and picnic
areas dotted the property with streams meandering throughout. It was a majestic estate that was popular
from the first website they set up and the first ad that appeared in “Brides
Today.” But when it was mentioned on
“Oprah,” the business almost spiraled out of control. They had weddings scheduled every weekend for
the following year. Fortunately,
Melanie’s staff was very well trained, so they were promoted to management
positions while they added more assistants to handle the daily grinding labor.
Wow, how to get your business spiraling out of control, don't we all need Oprah...Well done!
ReplyDeleteLove the description of the grounds. Sounds so pretty.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a lovely setting. I'm sure the mention on "Oprah" didn't hurt their business!
ReplyDeleteThe snippet covers A LOT of ground in an expositional manner. Interesting idea, though, I think. It held one's attention.
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